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Sarcastic
Contributed by
The_Phantom
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Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 07:35:00 AM in AEST
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The warmth of the life, the chill of the knife,
The pain of the cut, life totally sucks,
Feeling the thrill as I bleed, hatered being released,
Closing my eyes, praying I'll die,
Have I made my point clear, I laugh at your tears,
You don't care about me, don't try and preach to me,
Take your words of faith, and shove them some place,
Can't you see hell in my eyes, was I to feel bad cause you cried,
Should I think twice about what I say, how about this, shut up, and go the hell away,
Leave me alone my heart is made of stone,
My eyes roll back in my head, I'm almost dead,
If I loved life, why am I drawing pictures on myself with a knife,
Some say I'm crazy, do I care, well maybe,
How about jumping out this window, and smashing my head on the pravement,
Would that be cool, I'll do it for your entertainment,
Ask me if I care about anyone else, pass me that 12 gauge so I can shot myself,
Your smile makes me sick, go ahead call me a prick,
I feed off your hate, I'll shot you one time, and watch your head evaporate,
More blood spilled, what a thrill,
Well I have to die now, so please go some where and drowned.
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
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The_Phantom
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Re: Sarcastic
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 07:51:21 AM AEST
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Oh oh oh ... I am speechless ... what to say to this ... just hang in there for one more week and you'll be home in loving arms..
This is awesome poetry.
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 08:03:17 AM AEST
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Awww Matt..... (((BIG HUG))) count the days..not many left...ok..... well written tho...can feel the emotions overflowing..
Your friend and fan,
Jenni |
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Re: Sarcastic
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 08:20:04 AM AEST
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OMG Matt! Be strong. I can relate to your feelings.
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Re: Sarcastic
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 08:44:03 AM AEST
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Your pain and frustration come over strong.
A very good write..Please hang in there we need you here and you have those who love you waiting
Shari |
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Re: Sarcastic
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by LadyDama on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 09:33:11 AM AEST
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| my thoughts and blessings to you and your mind at this time... write it out and come home safely to your wife and us... blessings... michele |
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Re: Sarcastic
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 12:26:05 PM AEST
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| I think no matter how good our life can seem we feel like this at times! Hang in there! Christina |
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Re: Sarcastic
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 08:36:00 PM AEST
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| if im interpretting this poem wrong, let me know; but don't shoot me matt! {still have a few more things to do! lol} okay, it seems to me someone tried to shove religion down your throat, i too frown on that sort of behavior, and really, who cares what someone says, although it hurts when people are mean we all know who loves and cares about us, you and tracie being there for me, i am also here for you, so pm or write me if venting within' this write hasn't subsided some of those feelings, you are much cared about and imho i think that it is the stress you have been under and the excitement of going home soon, hang in there, your almost home!! ~big hug and lotsa love, nessa |
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Re: Sarcastic
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by venkat on
Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 08:24:31 AM AEST
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| Every one has his own hell and heven.. when heaven is not near hell is dear . so much anger..let your anger tear me to pieces..i will remain yours.. venkat |
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