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altered ways
Contributed by
ming
on
Monday, 26th October 2015 @ 01:21:34 PM in AEST
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opens its eyes
and rushes
made new
alchemized
through the
word forging
mind
the monster
lives
look! it's alive
I invite you
in and out
come and
associate
with my shadows
with my spark
the secrets
escape
unchained and
changing
entangled you
unsought and
caught
till abandoned
death do/did
us part.
Copyright ©
ming
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2015-10-26 13:21:34]
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Re: altered ways
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by Invierno on
Monday, 26th October 2015 @ 09:34:03 PM AEST
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Sublime, as most all your contributions are. If I still read The New Yorker, I should not be surprised to see you there.
Invierno |
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Re: altered ways
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by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 27th October 2015 @ 09:27:38 PM AEST
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Very unique poem indeed!!!!
James
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Re: altered ways
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th October 2015 @ 01:59:18 AM AEST
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the captivation
comes from the wind like a cloud
and disappears
soon too
If that's all there is
Wayne Dyer, the bald guy
who makes sense during the pledge
weeks on public television
Yeah, it sounds good
but hey, who is going to
break free and disentangle
themselves from the shadows
that aren't really their own?
Not right from wrong
like better or worse
you learn you might
if you ask
Great poem! Well done Ming!
I should heed your advice I know
maybe help start a revolution of sorts
Peace! |
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