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Haiku: restless
Contributed by
Jabberwocky
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Thursday, 29th October 2015 @ 12:31:46 AM in AEST
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I lie down eyes shut,
My thoughts and body quiet.
My eyes still flicker!
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Jabberwocky
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2015-10-29 00:31:46]
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Re: Haiku: restless
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by ming on
Thursday, 29th October 2015 @ 12:56:16 AM AEST
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Good one. :)
ming |
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Re: Haiku: restless
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th October 2015 @ 01:04:26 AM AEST
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really cool and exotically
simple
BTW Jabberwocky would be a great
Hockey name!
Peace! |
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Re: Haiku: restless
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by xHeathenx on
Thursday, 29th October 2015 @ 12:03:39 PM AEST
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That's how I feel every time when I try to sleep, and I'm about to get the spins. Just the mild flashing of light is disorienting. =
Nice and amusing. :) |
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Re: Haiku: restless
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 1st November 2015 @ 04:22:06 PM AEST
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yes, me too, hard to turn the thoughts off...
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Haiku: restless
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by shelby on
Sunday, 1st November 2015 @ 05:38:43 PM AEST
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Nicely done.
Michelle |
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Re: Haiku: restless
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by legato29 on
Sunday, 1st November 2015 @ 07:02:00 PM AEST
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| This is so evocative! It is succinct yet feels like a million words! Beautifully written! |
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