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::one night of my life
Contributed by
ladyfawn
on
Sunday, 1st November 2015 @ 12:37:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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::might need a name
feet upon the roof he is back again this trouble making bandit of birds hands exploring world and life again looking for an in-
he happily gallops from end to end sounding like one thousand horses when he stops silence is deafening broken window beckons-
next chimney calls him to explore, i yell loudly, /'/no! no! no! naughty boy!/'/ i bang on walls and stomp my feet his paws hesitate-
so far the bandit has not succeeded except of 16 chickens only 2 remain crowing comes from the guestroom in temporary cage-
now raccoon is at his nightly impase has tried unsuccessfully all his tricks silently defeated, footfalls cross above rain comes down softly.
::suspended animation
time has stopped as i wait for morning wide awake..... there will be no sleeping no internet, no tv.... satelites out again just me, heidi dog, softly falling rain and this vast unending nothingness of darkness the forest the only sound here is the deafening roar of the computer/'/s motor, a million times louder than normal two sounds- like a train inside a waterfall time sets back today, so one more hour of torture as much as i love the solitude of isolation the freedom from humans, cities, and noises all the animal life, countless trees, endless sky sometimes i feel alienated and far removed from the world
@->>->--
this is exquisite life a masterful piece indeed for we might only wonder what those we leave behind will feel how they will fare- hopefully our words will keep our breath alive enough to be remembered for it is one thing to be kept alive in a heart- quite another to be loved long after the last living one who loves you has perished...
love never dies a natural death
::amarillis
strong steadfast flower graceful and so beautiful eloquent, royal, so solitary very good for at a funeral why do you stand ever alone holding your head high above every one of the others speaking volumes in your silence remnants always left in one/'/s memory of your quiet beauty
::morning breaks
birdsong begins once more dark slowly replaced by light first a soft unfocused gray on this november first day small spats of sky emerge as i look upwards through paper birch tree leaves voices twitter and call chirping a symphony
the dangers of night have all long gone to their beds yet this writer has not slept one burning desire to express as the birds do so easily
::war on humanity
the war on humanity is ever present killers finding new ways to torture it is political, subversive and wrong peaceful hippies go about their day ignoring this whilst listening to life seeing only the good upon the earth world leaders lean towards socialism killing freedom in the agenda/'/s process as oceans are becoming more polluted humans are thinking only of themselves sign the petitions, protest, liberals being offended is the new progress forgotten are the enslaved in a quest to encompass everyone, accept except now conspiracy theorys by the killers are taken and believed as the new truth
::swedish fish
there are many good things in life none of which burst upon my pallet right now besides these delighfully chewy red candies! mouth is full to bursting- bag empty slowly they melt and bring memories stuck in teeth, plucked out by finger gone...................................................... washed away by wonderfully hot- pumpkin spice latte coffee capachino so satisfying, far more delightful than anything else in the world! plane jets overhead as cup runs dry planes bring memories to one/'/s mind traveling to other countries- wow! sights, scents, tastes, textures cultures, adventure, differences nothing finer or more fun ever! until one tiredly comes home and rediscovers the circle of life- finding one lone swedish fish.
*,,**,,**,,**
::happy november to all! xo...
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ladyfawn
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2015-11-01 12:37:18] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: ::one night of my life
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 1st November 2015 @ 01:21:56 PM AEST (User
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Oh, I wanted to be there with you as you wrote this depth of humanity. An old dog be our feet, and I'd say nothing. You just write lady, you just write. |
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Re: ::one night of my life
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Sunday, 1st November 2015 @ 05:29:20 PM AEST (User
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Beautiful,you took me there to sit with you.Love you
Michelle |
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Re: ::one night of my life
(User Rating: 1 ) by Invierno on
Sunday, 1st November 2015 @ 05:44:23 PM AEST (User
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A gorgeous composition.
Invierno |
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Re: ::one night of my life
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
Sunday, 1st November 2015 @ 09:45:58 PM AEST (User
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Beautiful
My mind went on a journey and all I had to do is sit back and enjoy the view. Splendid indeed.
James |
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Re: ::one night of my life
(User Rating: 1 ) by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Sunday, 1st November 2015 @ 11:26:30 PM AEST (User
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wow! what an excellence expression of a beautiful time in your life.make me remember why i love the sound of rain on the roof..love this write. |
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Re: ::one night of my life
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd November 2015 @ 01:19:10 AM AEST (User
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Holy long poem, Batman!!!! invierno would be proud of this ADHD man reading the entire thing and simultaneously enjoying it!!!
Love that you shared your many thoughts with us.
A huge thank you.
Tim |
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Re: ::one night of my life
(User Rating: 1 ) by irisblue on
Thursday, 5th November 2015 @ 09:42:25 AM AEST (User
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Wow!!!!! This poem is amazing! So much beauty and wisdom. I felt like I was there!!!!!!!! |
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Re: ::one night of my life
(User Rating: 1 ) by speedy on
Thursday, 5th November 2015 @ 05:50:35 PM AEST (User
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I love reading long poems and this one was fantastic!
Great write.
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Re: ::one night of my life
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Monday, 9th November 2015 @ 10:45:27 PM AEST (User
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What a journey, night to morning! If this is insomnia, I want to come along!
You have a gift for slowing time down long enough to write about it, before it escapes unnoticed!
Then you set the table and serve us a feast of moments in sound and technicolor!
You have written a rainbow.
Enchanting and full of affection for life.
How lovely it is to see the world as you do, even for a moment.
softerware |
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Re: ::one night of my life
(User Rating: 1 ) by springchic1979 on
Monday, 16th November 2015 @ 06:50:18 PM AEST (User
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::Might need a name
what a clever way to describe the Midnight Chicken Bandit! Sorry to hear that the pesky racoon got most of your chickens =/...but it made for an entertaining poem =)
::suspended animation
This poem makes me long for the solitude and peace you described...i live in a large home off of a main road a few blocks away from an airport and train tracks...
::morning breaks
i absolutely loved the line ""...this writer has not slept one burning desire to express as the birds do so easily"" *sigh* i wish i could write again and that it would come so easily...
::swedish fish
wonderful poem to stimulate the senses. However i caught a spelling error...you have spelled TECTURES when it should be TEXTURES.
As usual i have enjoyed your poetry Nessa! *hugs*...i will need to fill you in on why i have been missing from YPDC for sooooo long |
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Re: ::one night of my life
(User Rating: 1 ) by Beyfoxman5 on
Sunday, 29th November 2015 @ 08:27:33 AM AEST (User
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Boy, did I go on a ride. Thanks for giving me a seat.
Fox |
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Re: ::one night of my life
(User Rating: 1 ) by Beyfoxman5 on
Monday, 4th January 2016 @ 09:04:53 AM AEST (User
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Out of this world!
Fox |
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Re: ::one night of my life
(User Rating: 1 ) by The_Phantom on
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Another masterpiece, the flow, sweet, the words deep, an adventure of poetic rhyme only a great poet like your self could bring to life.
So glad to read you again my dear friend Nessa
The Phantom |
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Re: ::one night of my life
(User Rating: 1 ) by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 3rd March 2016 @ 01:04:21 AM AEST (User
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One helluva night. It/'/s like a family of poems were being introduced, and I caught a small glimpse of their personalities, and ultimately their hierarchy.
Utterly fascinating /'/Ness.
Thank you for that!
~Scorp |
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