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Time Is Not a Factor
Contributed by
euphoema
on
Tuesday, 10th November 2015 @ 05:10:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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From earth to space
Passing these planets
Then This galaxy
Beginning to think these Human beliefs are fallacies
Ahead of tiMe
Faster than light
But still slow
Matter flowS.
Out my mouth
With lack of gravity
trapped in a parallel universe
so it seems
adrift a star
gazing from a far
planets rocking
shaping life
with sun mazed
heat
oh friend in love
whereabouts come
the dread of the end
a break from connection
sucked in
as we both began puckering
what a dream as i see the ceiling
lying on my back just to
awake
was that a night of being baked
then back to it,
time is not a factor so there is none to waste
inhaling dark matter like its smoke
no feelings numb from a toke
laughing then crying
in a world of cloudy
rowdy pipers
flying higher above the kites
giving that stomach feeling
knowing I can do as I please
should I find the key
to my misery and unleash
some pleasantry
its about time i gain control
please keep keep it going
no wish but to keep it going
what a dream as i see the ceiling
lying on my back just to
awake
was that a night of being baked
then back to it
time is not a facto so there is none to waste
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Re: Time Is Not a Factor
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by speedy on
Tuesday, 10th November 2015 @ 07:44:47 PM AEST
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Good write.
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Re: Time Is Not a Factor
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by JamesStockdale on
Thursday, 12th November 2015 @ 06:52:44 AM AEST
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"Beginning to think these Human beliefs are fallacies "
After so much tragedy this year I question this myself.
Very nice poem indeed!
James |
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Re: Time Is Not a Factor
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by softerware on
Friday, 13th November 2015 @ 10:17:12 PM AEST
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A dream state is a good venue to test reality! You have done so admirably and come back to land where your began with us.
I loved the journey and the questions you pose!
And so the universe goes!
I admire your imagination and your tether to other-worldly presumptions. It serves your writing well!
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