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Mirror, mirror
Contributed by
kmec1990
on
Thursday, 12th November 2015 @ 11:16:27 PM in AEST
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life isnt easy,
time isn't kind
beauty fades
interests change
conversation wanes
prevarication
the new communication
mirror, mirror on the wall
tell me true,
how did we fall...
out of love
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kmec1990
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2015-11-12 23:16:27]
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Re: Mirror, mirror
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by FireStarter on
Friday, 13th November 2015 @ 12:36:50 AM AEST
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Re: Mirror, mirror
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by JamesStockdale on
Friday, 13th November 2015 @ 06:45:51 AM AEST
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Nice write
Glad you are back at it!
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Re: Mirror, mirror
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by speedy on
Friday, 13th November 2015 @ 05:37:26 PM AEST
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Truer words were never spoken.
Great write.
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Re: Mirror, mirror
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 13th November 2015 @ 07:21:03 PM AEST
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prevarication
the new communication
Those words weigh heavy with reality!
I can soooo relate to this. Wish the mirror had the answer.
Thank you for an enjoyable read.
Tim
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Re: Mirror, mirror
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by softerware on
Friday, 13th November 2015 @ 09:32:15 PM AEST
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An quite unexpected ending adds spice to this rhyme and leaves your calling card for the reader to remember!
you have a wonderful mastery of your own thoughts, and we are fortunate to be able to look into the window of your imagination!
softerware
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Re: Mirror, mirror
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by ming on
Saturday, 14th November 2015 @ 10:10:21 AM AEST
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Bittersweet. Done well.
ming |
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