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Too Beautiful To Say...
Contributed by
lovingwhispers
on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 02:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I tried to write a lovesong,as I sat cosied in my beret
Yet my pen could not portray my heart,
These feelings,too beautiful to say
I thought I had the perfect line,in the end it was only okay
It was just another subtle sign
These feelings,too beautiful to say
I rode a train and hummed a tune,looking out on an Autumn's day
I wished for your presence so I could show
These feelings,too beautiful to say
I'll not give up the moments,I spend trying to find a way
To put into words my happiness
These feelings,too beautiful to say
So for now what I write on paper,isn't all my heart should relay
'Tis merely kissing the surface
Of these feelings,too beautiful to say
Copyright ©
lovingwhispers
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2003-05-29 14:05:00]
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Re: Too Beautiful To Say...
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 04:45:52 PM AEST
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this poem is too beautiful
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Re: Too Beautiful To Say...
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 04:53:35 PM AEST
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This is really lovely, Whispers... Great to see you back...
Jenni |
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Re: Too Beautiful To Say...
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 07:34:36 PM AEST
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| awww...... sweet write:) ~hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Too Beautiful To Say...
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 07:54:23 PM AEST
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| Your poetry...like yourself, is a thing of amazing beauty. Thank you...for being you. o) |
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Re: Too Beautiful To Say...
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 08:24:56 PM AEST
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| Thats exactly what this is...Too beautiful to say, absoloutly fantastic! |
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Re: Too Beautiful To Say...
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 10:05:13 PM AEST
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| The title saids it all! Beautiful write! Christina |
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Re: Too Beautiful To Say...
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by darkmind on
Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 03:53:10 PM AEST
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| Good poem |
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Re: Too Beautiful To Say...
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by DreamWeaver on
Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 06:35:08 AM AEST
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| Lovely, romantic ... very heartfelt. ... Jan |
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