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Passage
Contributed by
spike
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Friday, 13th November 2015 @ 06:55:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
FamilyPoems
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I said goodbye to the son
and hello to the man;
the journey to this juncture
made me what I am.
I bid farewell to the daughter
and embraced the lady fair;
said adieu to the princess
who was no longer there.
children grow to adults
and yearn to take the field;
sometimes its the parents
who refuse to yield.
to always be the guardian,
sometimes their friend or foe
but also a compatriot,
weve been there, so we know.
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spike
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2015-11-13 18:55:51]
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Re: Passage
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by VR2776 on
Friday, 13th November 2015 @ 07:00:39 PM AEST
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| Nice flow and definitely very relatable .... Good job |
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Re: Passage
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by kmec1990 on
Saturday, 14th November 2015 @ 11:55:45 PM AEST
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| So true, my son just graduated from University last week and is job hunting far from home, this poem hits home...you spend your life raising them and then have to let them fly their own way, trusting that you taught them well enough. |
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Re: Passage
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 15th November 2015 @ 07:26:01 AM AEST
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beautiful and true!
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Passage
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by speedy on
Sunday, 15th November 2015 @ 04:32:57 PM AEST
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I think most parents are a bit melancholy when their children become adults. It's just as scary for the children sometimes too.
Great write.
Hannah B |
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