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My lovely sun
Contributed by
FireStarter
on
Wednesday, 25th November 2015 @ 04:26:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
AmericanTragedy
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Blue turns to gray,
which turns to black
My summertime sky
needs to pick up the slack
The sun that once
shined so bright
Gave up, turned away
and lost its fight
My lovely sun
was once not so afraid,
Now all it feels like doing
is hiding in the darkness of shade
Its lost all confidence
in its beauty
The shimmering of orange and red
is its duty
For when will my beautiful sun
love itself like I do?
Copyright ©
FireStarter
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2015-11-25 16:26:36]
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Re: My lovely sun
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by thomasu01 on
Thursday, 26th November 2015 @ 02:33:15 PM AEST
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Love this one firestarter,
is it just a phase it goes through?
Like us at times?
It does not seem to have lost any of its glory or strength here in Australia.
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Re: My lovely sun
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by softerware on
Friday, 27th November 2015 @ 01:13:48 AM AEST
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What a mood inducing write! This reminds me of a beautiful woman who is aging to a mellow hue and hiding the shadows of her former glory.
Your final question speaks of her lover, who still sees her as she was when he fell in love with her. "For when will my beautiful sun love itself like I do?"
A lovely write FireStarter; and the sun is alive and well in San Diego also!
softerware
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Re: My lovely sun
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by JamesStockdale on
Friday, 27th November 2015 @ 01:39:32 PM AEST
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Great poem.
Something out of the norm. I really liked it!
James |
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Re: My lovely sun
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 28th November 2015 @ 10:26:58 AM AEST
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| lovely, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: My lovely sun
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by Invierno on
Sunday, 29th November 2015 @ 08:46:08 AM AEST
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A beautiful piece....simply beautiful...one of your best.
Invierno |
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