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Read your eyes.
Contributed by
thomasu01
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Wednesday, 25th November 2015 @ 09:55:23 PM in AEST
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Read your eyes.
Your eyes absolutely are amazing
they are the windows to your soul
they make us go through a stroll
to the wonderful person in us all.
The eyes can be read like a book
and tell others where to look
for problems in body and mind
your eyes can be, one of a kind.
The eyes are the mirror image of
your body, internal organs, bones
if anything is wrong If you feel ill,
the eyes will reflect how you feel.
We can use them for vision
we can indicate to others
that we are happy, or sad,
lonely or mad or feeling bad.
That we have made our decision
for our future happiness and vision
that we are willing to take a chance
for a bit of long lasting romance.
The eyes can radiate energy
and reflect your emotions
for those future devotions
Advertising personal promotions.
Indicating that we are glad
healthy or sick, they reflect
all these these things for
those that can read your eyes.
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thomasu01
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Re: Read your eyes.
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by speedy on
Thursday, 26th November 2015 @ 06:38:29 AM AEST
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Great write.
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Re: Read your eyes.
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by softerware on
Friday, 27th November 2015 @ 01:04:51 AM AEST
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I never knew what these pupils were up to until I enjoyed your entertaining tale!
A toast to your clever and talented observation (pardon pun) into the crystal ball of our souls! You are a clever and talented writer! And I need a pair of sunglasses!
by your wise
tale I surmise;
that all disguise
(though well devised);
will meet demise;
because the eyes;
will compromise;
our foolish lies!
Who knew that Irisology;
would dabble in psychology;
so you could write anthologies;
unraveling my mythology!
All that's left is what you see;
A lady with no mystery!
softerware |
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Re: Read your eyes.
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by JamesStockdale on
Friday, 27th November 2015 @ 07:45:17 AM AEST
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Great poem!
The eyes can deceive as well.
James |
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Re: Read your eyes.
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th November 2015 @ 10:28:10 PM AEST
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windows to the soul indeed.
when the mind is asleep the eyes
still roll transmitting dream
Perhaps it's stored bottled up
light and sometimes you feel as
though you're falling, like a misstep
a momentary lapse in the physical
realm, then the fog upon awakening
Them eyes that read everything
or them eyes that misread everything
They just won't concentrate sometimes
All the times I'm thinking about my eyes
I draw a lot and look a lot at things, faces,
shadows, hopeful distortions
Thanks for writing this. Well done!
Peace!
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Re: Read your eyes.
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 28th November 2015 @ 10:24:41 AM AEST
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simply lovely! beautifully penned,
hugs n' love nessa |
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