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Somebody's Nobody
Contributed by
flex4life13
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Tuesday, 1st December 2015 @ 03:52:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
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For those eyes that gaze softly at the moon
of whose skin gently imbibes the aroma of the sun
For whose embrace fades too soon
his exodus leaves all but one stunned.
A deity for them labeled here as trite
so terrene a being, so hungry his fight.
As wild is the current, as feral as his veins
colorless insurgent, complex and unattained.
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Re: Somebody's Nobody
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 1st December 2015 @ 08:58:49 PM AEST
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absolutely beautiful,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Somebody's Nobody
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by softerware on
Thursday, 3rd December 2015 @ 08:19:24 PM AEST
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While I love this whole poem, my favorite line is "As wild is the current, as feral as his veins colorless insurgent, complex and unattained" is seductive and haunting!
Perhaps Nobody's Somebody would serve to better warn us of the unattainable nature of this mysterious one.
I would not change a single line, and though this is my first reading of your work, it will not be the last!
I look forward it!
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Re: Somebody's Nobody
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by JamesStockdale on
Friday, 4th December 2015 @ 10:29:54 AM AEST
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Beautiful!
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Re: Somebody's Nobody
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 5th December 2015 @ 12:03:51 AM AEST
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somebody's deconstucted nobody
On a cold morning walking past open land
smoothed down by bulldozer where housing was
about to be constructed
I saw a young girl in India native dress waiting for
a bus by the side of the road
I thought about the world that is now
Someone from a small village from Tanzania
or anywhere suddenly finding them self dressed
as they normally dress
Some place else in our world
This is a very beautiful poem!
Thanks!
Peace!
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Re: Somebody's Nobody
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 5th December 2015 @ 12:13:44 AM AEST
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no one is shaped by outcomes
in modern art
the smoothness in texture
next to thick droplets shaped only by the wind
Peace!
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Re: Somebody's Nobody
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by kmec1990 on
Sunday, 6th December 2015 @ 08:43:16 AM AEST
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Beautifully penned picture!
Kris |
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