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break the world in two
Contributed by
ming
on
Sunday, 20th December 2015 @ 11:51:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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walking in circles
writing/drawing words
with my feet
my mind begging
mindful intensity
magically covered in ink
legions of feelings
like nightmares of dripping paper
leaving visions of beyond
cracking open the chamber of secrets
coaxing comrades across the bridge of text
coming without future
only the now
one to the other
open eyes
hold steady
hot the fever
hours to forget
every
thing.
Copyright ©
ming
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2015-12-20 11:51:52]
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Re: break the world in two
(User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on
Monday, 21st December 2015 @ 08:43:36 AM AEST
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Lovely.
I like ( and by /'/like/'/ I mean LOVE) the ending,
"hold steady
hot the fever
hours to forget
every
thing."
So much there.
Invierno |
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Re: break the world in two
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by duff on
Monday, 19th September 2016 @ 03:04:36 PM AEST
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| Mysterious wrapped in exotic realm that you so manage to capture on a consistent basis. Intrigue that leaves you wandering further. Well done my friend |
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