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The Un-Suicide Note
Contributed by
etherealgurl
on
Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 01:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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What can I possibly say or do
To make up for the pain I've caused you?
How can I expect forgiveness
When I can't forgive myself?
I've searched my mind and heart
Death seems the only way out
But I can't leave
It would only make things worse...
The kids, you, my parents...
The pain it would cause..
(even tho you'd all be better off)
So, I guess the best punishment
is to continue living-
to continue feeling
This ugliness, this irreprehensible pain
that fills me to the core
Because I am just a whore.
Copyright ©
etherealgurl
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2003-05-30 01:35:00]
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Re: The Un-Suicide Note
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by LadyDama on
Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 02:55:16 AM AEST
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| i had a similar experience to your own (for thos, i say i am sorry to you)... you are not a whore... don't ever believe that... very good and painful write... keep getting it out... works for me... blessings to you... |
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Re: The Un-Suicide Note
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by Chuckx on
Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 06:45:04 AM AEST
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| The only ugliness is in the thoughts of the person who victimized you. Whores chose their occupation. The person who did this chose to do it. You are beautiful. You are a daughter of God; an heiress to His kingdom. Whatever experiences you may receive is irrelevent to who you are. But don't let the experiences you have victimize you. Now let your family know: you are beautiful, you are a daughter of God, you are eternal. Chuckx. |
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Re: The Un-Suicide Note
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 07:35:32 AM AEST
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Reading this made me sad and angry. I am sad becuase you believe the things tht you say. You are not dirty or a whore. You never asked for what happened to you. You do not need to apologise to ANYONE! secondly, I feel angry becuase I remember going through the same feelings after similar happened to me. Please try to believe that these feelings are 'normal' and that, I hope, in time you will realise that it is not your fault.
Be strong. I hope that venting helped you.
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Re: The Un-Suicide Note
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 03:10:36 PM AEST
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I echo what sleepless siren. Guys who rape girls are the lowest form of humanity. You are a person and deserve to be treated with respect and honour. Hang in there and soon you will see the light.
Bobo (Joel) |
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