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Life will keep you
Contributed by
softerware
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Tuesday, 5th January 2016 @ 08:04:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
FamilyPoems
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When I was young I wanted to win;
To lead, be right, and escape my kin!
To try my wings, and taste some sins.
When I had children of my own;
I raised them so they/'/d stand alone;
When they were free of me and grown.
And yet somehow I hoped I/'/d be;
included in their families;
The further that they drew from me.
Freedom means we cut our ties;
Live away from mothers eyes;
Certain well grow worldly wise!
I/'/m old now and know how to lose;
follow; be wrong; and walk in their shoes.
And they can do anything that they choose!
They long to win, to lead, and be right;
To make their mistakes when Im not in sight;
And I wish them success with all of my might.
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Re: Life will keep you
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 5th January 2016 @ 11:57:55 PM AEST
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beautiful, our children are everything:)
hugs n/'/ love nessa |
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Re: Life will keep you
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by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 6th January 2016 @ 12:22:28 PM AEST
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So true from a female perspective.
I/'/ve seen it many times.
Guys tend to stay around a bit longer.
This was typical of your work Jaye. Brilliant and well thought out and from a rather professional insight. Your work is always worth the read!
James |
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Re: Life will keep you
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by xHeathenx on
Wednesday, 13th January 2016 @ 09:55:34 AM AEST
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Nicely done Jaye. Sadly enough, 85% of the time when I see my mother, it/'/s to come by and do laundry, however I have often done something nice like get her some food from a restaurant nearby, sit and talk with her. I do of course come by on occasion to see her, but I feel it/'/s not enough, though the little is seems a decent amount of time, probably in comparison with one/'/s own longevity. Oh, pretenses.
-Mark |
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