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That Critical Moment
Contributed by
waynster
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Wednesday, 6th January 2016 @ 03:57:01 PM in AEST
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That moment
when we realize things are so very wrong
We seem to be slipping through time
just living and listening to the song
The path we walk is tiresome
the pain we endure, we hide
We want to set ourselves free
but dont want that roller coaster ride
Reality is sometimes so harsh
it just laughs in your face
You have no idea why you hang on so long
you just know you have been blind in this place
So many things that you love
but a sense of loneliness swallows your heart
You hate to be alone
and this situation just tears you apart
Your heart says one thing
but your mouth utters a happy song
You fight within yourself every day
this is whats so very wrong
Being afraid
is somewhat the same as being weak
You want to free yourself
because your future at present looks so very bleak
Only you
the master of your very own destiny
It is only you
who can right your wrongs and set yourself free
Written: 6 January 2016
Copyright 2015 E. Wayne Searles All Rights Reserved
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Re: That Critical Moment
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 6th January 2016 @ 11:50:58 PM AEST
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beautifully penned, insightful and inspiring,
hugs n/'/ love nessa |
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Re: That Critical Moment
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by CharM on
Thursday, 7th January 2016 @ 08:35:18 PM AEST
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| Wow! Such an emotional and deep poem. Very well written! 👍👍👍 |
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Re: That Critical Moment
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by irisblue on
Saturday, 9th January 2016 @ 01:34:48 PM AEST
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Wayne,
I love this poem! Life has its ups and downs, we just have to keep moving forward and learn from our past mistakes but not let them bring us down. Live life and keep doing the next right thing show love and ignore the haters!!!!
God bless,
Kara |
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