|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Pestacide
Contributed by
simple_angel
on
Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 05:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
|
Such looks can't
Be be hid... Hold,
You've got a gift for all
That photos can't convey,
This won't last any other way.
Blown away
You're famous for fatality
Oh, that smile you mould
Will last in the memory,
Be divine
For life...
Just take the mood, I'll take out a knife.
Blown away
You're famous for fatality
Roll Camera
This new scar fits your anatomy
Never look for another
Never again
Never wish for the summer
To know where you been
Never want to be loved
All over town
You'll be famous enough
Buried Underground.
Copyright ©
simple_angel
... [
2003-05-30 05:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Pestacide
(User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 10:34:52 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
It does have a dark obsessed feel to it, hope this isnt all you think about?
Otherwise it is a good imaginative poem. |
|
|
Re: Pestacide
(User Rating: 1 )
by simple_angel on
Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 03:31:07 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Thankfully, no. It was just somthing that occured to me, turned out ok i guess.I'm really a nice person, honest! |
|
|
Re: Pestacide
(User Rating: 1 )
by Zee on
Thursday, 21st August 2003 @ 07:37:11 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
A very Dark Scenario created Flawlessly.
I liked u r write very much! Keep up the Good work! |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Site Help
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
