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Another Try
Contributed by
Solmyr1404
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Monday, 18th January 2016 @ 05:24:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Please, just leave me be,
Just let me cry.
I swear I/'/m fine,
But deep down, I want to die.
I can/'/t explain it,
There/'/s no reason or rhyme.
Don/'/t try to help me,
Words of comfort sound trite.
With time and tears the feelings fade,
Then I/'/ll exhale an exhausted sigh.
Tomorrow starts anew, even without you.
All alone, I guess, I/'/ll give it another try.
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Solmyr1404
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2016-01-18 17:24:23]
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Re: Another Try
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by hvsanx on
Monday, 18th January 2016 @ 09:13:06 PM AEST
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| Great poem I can totally relate !! |
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Re: Another Try
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by TheTimmy56666 on
Thursday, 21st January 2016 @ 11:27:22 AM AEST
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| I understand where you are coming from. Very nice write |
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Re: Another Try
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 23rd January 2016 @ 09:22:01 PM AEST
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indeed this is how most human people have at least once in their life have felt.
You know, once you understand that you are human, and not a giraffe or an eggshell or a piece of plastic.
when words of kind wisdom don/'/t seem to help, one needs their space.
I think of myself as being earnest, I believe that I am.
But I have had my own failings, maybe that/'/s why I believe that I am.
So you back off and you believe someone will figure things out on their own.
And you then be earnest, and you understand
what being human is.
Another Try - a lot of another tries, all you need.
That/'/s what we all need!
Very good write!
Peace!
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