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demons
Contributed by
NikashortyycakeFolsom
on
Monday, 15th February 2016 @ 06:53:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Lost in a storm of hate and tears
Quickly losing track of these passing years
Alone, I face my demons in the dark
Letting each leave its own permanent mark
Im unsure how much longer I can survive
without the warmth of your light by side --
But that kind of bliss was never meant for my heart
Yours would never learn to play the part
In solitude I let the dark take control
Let it have whats left of my soul
Ill lay here alone, lost in my own sorrow
Hoping to be in a better place tomorrow
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Re: demons
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by softerware on
Monday, 15th February 2016 @ 08:02:33 PM AEST
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You challenge us to survive the night by setting us on a perilous edge and asking us what we would do!
By your example you give us reason to hope "to be in a better place tomorrow".
Words of optimism that begin as you are sinking under the burden.
A short story with a worthy lesson.
thank you,
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