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In the days before.
Contributed by
wordsy
on
Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 02:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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In the days before
when hearts did soar
and youth shone in our eyes
Before the fall of innocents
and all those little white lies
Before the days we're forced to face
the world and all it's fears
Before the time when we must wipe
our eyes now full of tears
Before the dawn of darker days
when the world was at our feet
and all the wide eyed wonder
when the world was one big treat
Before the nights in which we toss
in desperate need of sleep
and pray tomorrow that we do find
a hope that we can keep.
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wordsy
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2003-05-30 14:35:00]
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Re: In the days before.
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by Saira on
Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 03:11:37 PM AEST
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| It's a beautiful write. I read your other poems too. They are equally wonderful! |
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Re: In the days before.
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by Wrybod on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 06:25:20 PM AEST
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Real poem abou reality.
And I really liked it |
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Re: In the days before.
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 06:20:05 PM AEST
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as always my friend...so few words....such huge meaning behind them. I have been a fan of your poetry since the first write of yours ever read. very well done once again.
Barkeeper....another one for my friend, on me.
Larry |
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