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shards of truth
Contributed by
ming
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Tuesday, 23rd February 2016 @ 03:08:16 PM in AEST
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memory distorts
jangled at the dissonance
into something endless
graying the past into murky
I am Rome burning and
tiny letters crammed and
running sideways up the edges
cauterizing wounds before they
happen love is breakable
all love is even a four-word text
even a sorry-faced emoticon
every atom whirls and clinches
the dark negotiations of un-hold
my heartbeat.
Copyright ©
ming
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2016-02-23 15:08:16]
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Re: shards of truth
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 24th February 2016 @ 10:50:10 AM AEST
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Your poetry takes my breath away ... Your style and thought process are completely your own, and that dear poet is a rare gift indeed.
I also always enjoy the quotes you so carefully choose for your author comment. Keep up the incredible work!
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Re: shards of truth
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by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 24th February 2016 @ 10:13:47 PM AEST
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Simply wonderful........
Yes that good!
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Re: shards of truth
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by Invierno on
Saturday, 27th February 2016 @ 02:45:15 AM AEST
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What can I say, Ming? Praising you is becoming redundant, so let this comment serve as the highest praise I can muster.
Invierno |
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Re: shards of truth
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by thehotshotpoet on
Tuesday, 1st March 2016 @ 11:15:01 AM AEST
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| good read thanks for sharing |
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Re: shards of truth
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by northernlights on
Tuesday, 1st March 2016 @ 11:52:16 AM AEST
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| Distortion,graying,running,whirling,clinching the dark and as the poet is poised with quill, an announcement, a perfect presence for you are Rome!! Burning your thoughts eternally onto the page. |
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