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Buried Alive
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Wednesday, 24th February 2016 @ 11:08:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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If tears could fertilize
I would be
The tallest tree
Chopped down
On the forest floor
If suicidal tendencies
And giving up
Weren/'/t discrepancies
I could be rich with fallacies
Instead of dirt poor
If loneliness were the cure
The preventive medicine
That blocks the impure
That isolates and ensures
More Hell to endure
If being stuck in one/'/s head
Is where the treasure map lead
If the key unlocked
More than Pandora/'/s box
I/'/d be more alive than dead.
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2016-02-24 11:08:50]
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Re: Buried Alive
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by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 24th February 2016 @ 11:38:07 AM AEST
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Wonderful write. The third and fourth stanzas are purely golden. However I hope you are not blue. Welcome back we missed you ;)
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Re: Buried Alive
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 25th February 2016 @ 01:40:16 AM AEST
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:(
One of the best YPDCers! Thank goodness you/'/re back, even if it is a throat choker. :(
Throat choker: TIMgent reference to tear jerker. |
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Re: Buried Alive
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by SocialMisfit on
Thursday, 25th February 2016 @ 09:13:49 AM AEST
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| almost 10 years i have come to your page.....not one word from you has been anything but beautiful....keep posting you beautiful soul. :) |
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Re: Buried Alive
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 26th February 2016 @ 05:51:51 PM AEST
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beautiful expression of feelings and so beautifully penned:)
hugs n love nessa |
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Re: Buried Alive
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by Odessa19 on
Saturday, 27th February 2016 @ 02:32:24 AM AEST
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And by so much you are...
More alive than when unsaid. |
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Re: Buried Alive
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by Invierno on
Sunday, 28th February 2016 @ 01:19:25 PM AEST
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bravo for such expression!
Mike |
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Re: Buried Alive
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by irisblue on
Sunday, 28th February 2016 @ 07:48:47 PM AEST
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Wow!!!
how I could relate to this brilliantly expressed write. The last stanza is my favorite! !!! Thank you for sharing this
Huggs,
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Re: Buried Alive
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2016 @ 10:26:34 PM AEST
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| Great poem!! |
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Re: Buried Alive
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by ming on
Tuesday, 5th July 2016 @ 07:29:14 PM AEST
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Alive, alive, alive! You are raw power.
ming |
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Re: Buried Alive
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th September 2018 @ 01:06:06 AM AEST
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| Hi. ☺🖑 |
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Re: Buried Alive
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th September 2018 @ 01:10:20 AM AEST
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| I agree with Ming. You //are // raw power!!! Just wow. Duh-amn! |
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Re: Buried Alive
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th September 2018 @ 01:13:35 AM AEST
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| I love your metaphors! 👍 |
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