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Thinner Twine
Contributed by
jamesstockdale
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Wednesday, 24th February 2016 @ 12:01:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Darkness has become my only friend
Tortured by life it seems
Agony filled with sadness
Never comes to an end
The sun brings more darkness
The moon has no glow
Hopeless dreams
The only kind I know
Without energy
I have no seeds to sew
My soul is in rapid decline
Better men than I
Have hung from thinner twine
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jamesstockdale
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2016-02-24 12:01:56]
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Re: Thinner Twine
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 24th February 2016 @ 12:51:37 PM AEST
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Chilling. Captivating. Fits the mood nicely...Yes siree!
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Re: Thinner Twine
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by Invierno on
Sunday, 28th February 2016 @ 01:17:27 PM AEST
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Having been there (and still so at times), this is a painful, though real and brutal read.
If only I were a poet and had the words to lessen your pain. But alas, the mightiest poet that ever breathed (of which we share a molecule of air they breathed every minute or so) is toothless as a newborn in aiding you-
work through the pain. start by dissecting the primary source and deconstruct the dynamic that led to such abysmal inner angst.
You are your own jailer and prisoner- learn that- the keys are jangling on your belt if you have desire (not all do, of course) to pluck them to your betterment.
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Re: Thinner Twine
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by irisblue on
Sunday, 28th February 2016 @ 07:40:22 PM AEST
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Sweet James
I/'/m sorry you are hurting my friend, but my goodness it inspired a beautiful and magnificent write!!!!!
Huggs,
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Re: Thinner Twine
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 17th April 2016 @ 09:06:03 AM AEST
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so beautifully penned, poetic perfection,
hugs n love nessa |
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Re: Thinner Twine
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 6th September 2020 @ 10:59:56 AM AEST
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//Damn, the anguish, the pain. Yet, great use of metaphors. Indeed pain to poets brings great poetry and here in lies a perfect example.
Another wower, Jimmy!!!!
Thanks,
Dugan
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