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between a blank page and a lunatic
Contributed by
ming
on
Wednesday, 9th March 2016 @ 12:06:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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To step backward
ever backward
line by line
merely soft breath
and weary eyes
Groundlessness
that lies between
chasing an endless
spiral as words echo
and the sound of one pen
flying exploding dropping
and I/'/m not about about
Files open in seconds
or years to part before
the meet
Someone heaves
it/'/s me or muse/pen
gagging on ink hidden
under the tongue.
Copyright ©
ming
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2016-03-09 12:06:47]
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Re: between a blank page and a lunatic
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by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 9th March 2016 @ 02:50:40 PM AEST
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Very interesting poem indeed...
The last stanza threw me a bit. But I got it on the second read :)
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Re: between a blank page and a lunatic
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by Invierno on
Wednesday, 9th March 2016 @ 09:19:41 PM AEST
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So very cool....as always I am in awe of your processes. Thanks for the treasures you give me. (for everyone, I know, but I claim them to my inner being)
Invierno |
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Re: between a blank page and a lunatic
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th March 2016 @ 02:49:00 AM AEST
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These words swirled about and you seemingly grabbed them from the air and arranged them on the page. I won/'/t pretend to get it ( exactly ) but I so love abstract because it often inspires me to write.
Thank you,
Tim |
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Re: between a blank page and a lunatic
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by unknown_utopia on
Friday, 11th March 2016 @ 04:04:39 AM AEST
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Abstract indeed
well done...... |
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Re: between a blank page and a lunatic
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 1st January 2017 @ 04:29:06 PM AEST
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What a pleasurable read. Everything from the apt title to the graphic description of our process as writers.
Excellent job.
~Scorp |
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