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My Lonely Smile For The Pines
Contributed by
Invierno
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Wednesday, 9th March 2016 @ 09:15:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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All around, beyond my soul/'/s deepest vision
pines sigh heavy above my cloaked heart,
echoing in surrender, snow above to below;
white fluff of tons so airy it crushes me
in beauty-
hurts my lonely smile for the pines.
All day,
from the sun peeking inside early me,
lighting chambers where sorrow and joy roam
to soft clutching-
past indifferent trunks,
crying needle/'/s tears glisten to lunar claim,
this softer lumen points, begs the way to sleep-
feet no longer listen to my soaked in life brain;
toes leading deeper in the white,
beyond command these footsteps feign
progress that only I see-
My lonely smile commiserates the sorrow-joy of sighing trees.
Copyright ©
Invierno
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2016-03-09 21:15:34]
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Re: My Lonely Smile For The Pines
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by ming on
Wednesday, 9th March 2016 @ 11:52:04 PM AEST
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Your nature write is much much more. Beautiful and deep. Love this. Sorrow and joy. Balance is the key.
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Re: My Lonely Smile For The Pines
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th March 2016 @ 02:44:15 AM AEST
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All that snow! Brrrr.... ;-)
Seemed more of a giant metaphor than an actual poem about nature but some of us do like to commune with nature to let our minds explore, expand and contemplate.
Indeed a likeable and enjoyable read.
Thank you.
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Re: My Lonely Smile For The Pines
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by JamesStockdale on
Thursday, 10th March 2016 @ 08:42:17 AM AEST
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Great poem. I see where you kept nature throughout the poem unlike my own. I get your comments now. Beautiful write.
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Re: My Lonely Smile For The Pines
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by unknown_utopia on
Friday, 11th March 2016 @ 04:03:01 AM AEST
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| Thanx for sharing your deep Inner vision |
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