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The Broken Facade
Contributed by
softerware
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Friday, 11th March 2016 @ 01:13:17 PM in AEST
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I dont hate you.
I hate the disappointment I feel inside. Im embarrassed to know that I can hurt this badly.
My anger is a loud and fierce disguise. Pain in strengths clothing.
You see, this is important to me.
I care what you think.
If it didnt matter, I would feel nothing.
And you would never know.
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Re: The Broken Facade
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by ming on
Friday, 11th March 2016 @ 02:32:33 PM AEST
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/'/My anger is a loud and fierce disguise/'/ Love this line. :)
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Re: The Broken Facade
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by Invierno on
Friday, 11th March 2016 @ 10:02:49 PM AEST
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Indifference is the ultimate insult.
I/'/m sorry for your pain, my friend.
Mike |
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Re: The Broken Facade
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th March 2016 @ 01:44:11 AM AEST
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//
I hate the disappointment I feel inside. Im embarrassed to know that I can hurt this badly. //
I so relate to that line. I generally push it further down inside me.
Such pure emotion! If this is real, I/'/m sorry you/'/re in pain.
Take care of YOU. |
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Re: The Broken Facade
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th March 2016 @ 09:46:20 PM AEST
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It was hard reading this from you SW
I think inside sometimes the worse
that I must be
But no one reveals me
other than the people I love or maybe even respect the most
So, for me that is how I know you are very very good
Still, it is hard to read your poem.
In life, there are always a lot of things going on
In life, only a fool would not from time to time only
wish that they could be invisible
and hide away
It almost makes one angry, but if they are lucky
some really nice person comes along
and makes them see the truth
someone else hurts far much worse...
which is a different story/and sad to know
but it makes you strong fir someone else
I love your writing you would make a great great editor
and I mean that with high praise!!!
Peace! |
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Re: The Broken Facade
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 14th March 2016 @ 11:30:29 PM AEST
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you can not hide,
we see you
and
we care........ |
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Re: The Broken Facade
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by xHeathenx on
Thursday, 17th March 2016 @ 07:59:32 AM AEST
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"My anger is a loud and fierce disguise. Pain in strengths clothing."
These lines are intense, and bring it to a surprisingly expressive piece with such a short number of lines and words.
There/'/s much to be seen, in this write, in ourselves, and by which, everyone we meet.
A reminder of the common phrase "everything isn/'/t always what it //looks// like." :) |
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