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The Poet's Machination
Contributed by
xHeathenx
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Saturday, 19th March 2016 @ 12:17:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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With every tear shed
We seek ten saplings/'/ stead
Joyous moments bathed
In our history so crazed
Within our closed eyes
Lie the dreams that cannot die
Tasting future/'/s fantasy
Imagery machinery
Water wheels then turn
We then purge away our burns
We create time and space
Produce them, behind a friendly face
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xHeathenx
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2016-03-19 12:17:40]
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Re: The Poet's Machination
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by softerware on
Saturday, 19th March 2016 @ 06:52:44 PM AEST
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My favorite line is "within our closed eyes lie the dreams that cannot die." The artist is a machine of imagery, creating time and space, behind a friendly face! You have captured the essence of art, be it poetry, music, sculpture, or painting! Defining the artist through the need to make the world as his heart sees it.
Breathtaking. And without boundaries of time; this will be as true a century from now as the day it was lovingly penned. |
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Re: The Poet's Machination
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by JamesStockdale on
Sunday, 20th March 2016 @ 08:15:54 AM AEST
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Great poem.
The first stanza quickly captured my attention and the rest kept it. Somehow all of this works very well but it/'/s like all the stanzas tell separate stories while flowing together perfectly. Very unique! |
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