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Of all the Hearts I've Left Behind
Contributed by
xHeathenx
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Saturday, 19th March 2016 @ 01:42:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I made a joke at your expense
Unaware of the consequence
All I/'/ve misconstrued,
Exposed my inner nude
I/'/ve made mistakes throughout my life
Had the audacity to call them strife
Now I/'/ve come to learn
Just why your resistance was so stern
Of all the hearts I/'/ve left behind
Yours is the one I still want to have as mine
I can see it now, drifting in time/'/s sands
All thanks to, these shameful idle hands
In hopes to find it I scanned
In hopes we/'/d make a mountainous stand
May I retrieve it, before I perish in the brine?
Or is the thought, but simply asinine?
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Re: Of all the Hearts I've Left Behind
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by softerware on
Saturday, 19th March 2016 @ 03:43:54 PM AEST
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A very clever twist at the end brings this mini-story to an acrid finish! A touch of spice to a mild menu of self-reproach, and longing reflection!
Just the right contrast to flash in the pan at the finale; like a sweet crepe Suzette, bursting into flame! Eloquent flourish; much enjoyed and unexpected!
Delightful!
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