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All Things
Contributed by
spike
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Monday, 21st March 2016 @ 04:25:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
obsession
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I am a sculptor in the gym,
a salesman on the phone;
a lover in the bedroom,
(even on my own)
an artist in the kitchen,
Webber at the wheel;
a rock star in the shower,
(I make the neighbours squeal)
a judge unto my family,
a tyrant to my kind;
ruthless in Monopoly,
and one-eyed to the blind
a high roller on the internet,
Gordon Gekko when at work;
so why do so many tweet
Im such a @#%*$#! jerk?
Copyright ©
spike
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2016-03-21 04:25:58]
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Re: All Things
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by xHeathenx on
Monday, 21st March 2016 @ 07:02:52 AM AEST
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Ah, this is fantastic Spike! The rhythm lasts perfectly throughout, and is humorous and serves almost like a fable.
On top of that, the humorous is smile-inducing, and carries almost a sense of a cute innocence to it as well. :) |
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Re: All Things
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Saturday, 26th March 2016 @ 10:42:21 AM AEST
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Hey when your good at everything
people will have a problem.
man i enjoy reading this unique look
at yourself.excellently written.i like it. |
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Re: All Things
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by SuicidalSon on
Saturday, 26th March 2016 @ 08:37:49 PM AEST
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Nice write, I enjoyed this much.
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Re: All Things
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 14th April 2016 @ 01:04:27 PM AEST
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ha! absolutely loved reading this light-hearted poem! beautifully
penned as ever:)
hugs n love nessa
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