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Invisible
Contributed by
Solmyr1404
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Tuesday, 22nd March 2016 @ 05:52:57 PM in AEST
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Sometimes I wish I were invisible,
Most days it seems I already am.
Seems like it/'/d be fun at first,
Oh, the pranks I could pull.
But curiosity would always get the best of me,
Would anyone even notice I was gone?
Still, most days wish I could be invisible,
At least then everyone would have an excuse
To look right through me.
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Re: Invisible
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by softerware on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2016 @ 09:12:36 PM AEST
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There is wonderful mischief in this poem! Your playful side is showing! Share it more often and you would not be as transparent as you think. Everyone loves joy and it is so hard to find. You have a rare gift to offer.
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Re: Invisible
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by xHeathenx on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2016 @ 06:24:21 AM AEST
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| I don/'/t mean any disrespect by this in the least, but with how it starts off, it/'/s relating to a pretty common idea, and so I expected it to be in that respect a cliche; however, given your clever end there, you/'/ve torn away the label of cliche, and added a new thought and element to it, to make it unique and all your own. :) |
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Re: Invisible
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by unknown_utopia on
Friday, 25th March 2016 @ 10:54:32 PM AEST
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ha ha
yes the pranks that could be pulled.... |
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