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To Those Who...
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xHeathenx
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Friday, 25th March 2016 @ 05:52:40 AM in AEST
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To those who have a creative heart,
Who pour forth, an emotional work of art
Whether you trickle streams to placid ponds;
Or release raging rapids, racing to meet the ocean;
No matter how long it takes,
Your flow is always in motion
To those who rain on parades,
Try being sunshine on a cloudy day
If you wish to control the weather,
See you make it just a little better
Because even if the dark times bring in pain,
With a single smile, you can help, to cast it all away
To those who fear, the thought of being alone
Remember that is when, your passions you can hone
Your sprit is stronger than you know,
And all you need, is some incentive to let it show
In time you//'//ll find, your self to be your ally, and source of mends;
Your treasured companion, who will help set your greatest trends
Within you is the love, praise, and encouragement of a friend
And isn//'//t that, what we truly want in the end?
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Re: To Those Who...
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by JamesStockdale on
Friday, 25th March 2016 @ 12:20:30 PM AEST
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A great poem with powerful stanzas and the last sums it up very well. Overall a great poem from start to finish with a nice flow! "Your sprit is stronger than you know....." Well said!
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Re: To Those Who...
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by softerware on
Saturday, 26th March 2016 @ 02:00:37 PM AEST
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How encouraging to find we are always our own best advocate! When we are failing, and no one is there to bear witness, we find our strength. Your last stanza is a universal truth, that too many never discover.
Yours is a story of self power and inner resources, and you are correct! We much prefer looking outward for answers than within.
Your message is a resource; an invitation; a consolation!
It is easier to mourn in the daylight than to ponder in the darkness, but to change our fates, we must first change ourselves.
softerware
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