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Inquisitive
Contributed by
xHeathenx
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Saturday, 26th March 2016 @ 07:51:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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A pensive soul drifting
Upon a tossing sea;
Seeking to know what lies beyond;
Inquisitive we be
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xHeathenx
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2016-03-26 07:51:31]
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Re: Inquisitive
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by softerware on
Saturday, 26th March 2016 @ 12:42:21 PM AEST
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I love the mood of this, and the analogy is vivid. The verse ends without identifying what is to be found, leaving us to write our own ending and identify with the journey you began for us.
Every reader will own this story, thanks to your simple eloquence, and your decision to open a door without walking through it.
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