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One winged angel
Contributed by
youngpoet1989
on
Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 08:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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An angel with one wing
cannot fly
It's own self cannot mend
the pain
She is always left there
to cry
Only a miracle can break this
shackled chain
What a tragedy
only to have one wing
Never able to to
take flight
She lies in the darkness
never to wake in the
morning light
Lost in her nightmares
She wishs one day that fate
will help her fly beyond heaven's gate.
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youngpoet1989
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2003-05-30 20:35:00]
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Re: One winged angel
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 08:50:52 PM AEST
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| oh this is special!! i love your concept and yes you were very creative:) ~hugs nessa |
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Re: One winged angel
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by youngpoet1989 on
Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 12:03:22 AM AEST
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I make a mistake in this poem,
" Never able to to take flight "
It's not supposed to have two to's in it.
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Re: One winged angel
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by youngpoet1989 on
Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 12:04:41 AM AEST
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I made a mistake in this poem,
" Never able to to take flight "
It's not supposed to have two to's in it.
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Re: One winged angel
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 1st June 2003 @ 01:46:14 AM AEST
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This is really lovely, Youngpoet... You say you don't know where it came from...but I do... a warm heart....
Jenni |
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Re: One winged angel
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 1st June 2003 @ 11:04:53 AM AEST
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This was creative Loved it Love the angels!
Great write! Christina |
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Re: One winged angel
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 18th June 2003 @ 12:44:38 AM AEST
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this was great for lack of a better word.
Bobo (Joel) |
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