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Words Cut Deep
Contributed by
xHeathenx
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Wednesday, 30th March 2016 @ 04:20:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
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When spoken daggers fence deeply, penetrating the thin veneer
The damage is felt, but isn/'/t always quite so clear
Sometimes, the flesh, is shattered just like the mood
And then we/'/re left, to ponder, the damage as we brood
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Re: Words Cut Deep
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by softerware on
Wednesday, 30th March 2016 @ 10:01:53 PM AEST
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This has rich textures of moods and shifts so effortlessly with your rhyme from one to the other!
It is a mini-story, and one we can all relate to!
So well described, it stings.
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Re: Words Cut Deep
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 31st March 2016 @ 08:43:05 PM AEST
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I can relate to the last line
"and then we are left, to ponder, the damage as we brood"
it could make one stronger, change for the better, or weigh the words a bit more /
There is always the other end, the me, who says something that wounds another, unknowingly...
lot to think about here.
I like it!
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Re: Words Cut Deep
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by duff on
Wednesday, 24th August 2016 @ 07:45:13 AM AEST
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I like how compact it is yet there is so much said. It/'/s direct and there/'/s a vulnerability you can feel.
When spoken daggers fence deeply
I dig that line
Well done
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