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Faulty Design
Contributed by
Invierno
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Tuesday, 5th April 2016 @ 04:38:30 PM in AEST
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In selecting timbers to construct this being
the world shall see;
this creature to portray by proxy that which makes me
me.
Unblemished, free of knot and bow;
Now I and heaven know they don///'///t exist when it///'///s time to fit;
A to slip neatly into B- wonky now this finished product I call
me.
The juice is run, bulbs spark in this mind of mine,
problems solved at speed of light one at a time,
residue builds; a reservoir of ill fills against my plea,
no release for tears engineered by me.
Copyright ©
Invierno
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2016-04-05 16:38:30]
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Re: Faulty Design
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 5th April 2016 @ 06:15:24 PM AEST
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| Yes, we build monuments to false gods. Those gods that should lead to pleasant pastures, but gods are fallible....and don/'/t we know it. Know where you are coming from. As much as such make us who we are? In the end, it is ourselves, and we should need no crutch. Gods are only those we seek to be defined by.....whatever form they may take. And for the most part, they are certainly not gods........nor /'/goddesses. /'/ |
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Re: Faulty Design
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by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 6th April 2016 @ 02:30:03 PM AEST
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Well written Mike.
I like how you brought it all together and timber
is a trade of mine as well. Thanks!
James |
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Re: Faulty Design
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by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 9th April 2016 @ 02:15:36 PM AEST
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Excellent flow,
thanx for sharing. |
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