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the holy fool
Contributed by
ming
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Tuesday, 12th April 2016 @ 10:45:00 AM in AEST
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abstract
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smiled like winter
with a low-slung halo
and well bruised by the world
risky work, life
and some things stay secret
even when told
and there/'/s over a hundred ways
to unpack silence
hidden under the pillow
a small moon
changing
the push and pull
with the darkness
as a curtain and
the walls are bones
and taking my soul-print
with it, a quiet delete
a mute scream
where time creeped
and turned
things hollow.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2016-04-12 10:45:00]
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Re: the holy fool
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Tuesday, 12th April 2016 @ 04:44:33 PM AEST
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So true, so true!
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Re: the holy fool
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by alicewhite on
Wednesday, 13th April 2016 @ 08:38:45 PM AEST
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| very deep and a fool never knows he was fooled cause he never knows he is a fool because he is a fool ,others can be so cruel to an unaware beginner at the start of the journey id rather be pure n a fool than wise and yet knowingly choosing through spite to be cruel xmade me think so i know this is very good |
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Re: the holy fool
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by duff on
Wednesday, 13th April 2016 @ 10:08:12 PM AEST
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There is always a darkness accompanied by mystery in your writing that is fun. It teases your thoughts. My favorite line is " to unpack silence".
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