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I Should Ever Feel So
Contributed by
Invierno
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Saturday, 16th April 2016 @ 11:54:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Candlelight and dawn/'/s chill
as our moon takes flight,
making room
for the sun to fill
the sky.
Caressing me,
my shoulder,
Up to my hair?
Yes, there, now lower...
oh baby, slower.
That color in the east will never
repeat this perfect glow;
your touch, this moment,
I/'/ve stopped my mind for,
so I should ever feel so
Copyright ©
Invierno
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2016-04-16 11:54:37]
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Re: I Should Ever Feel So
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 16th April 2016 @ 05:45:07 PM AEST
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| The title and the last line say/'/s it all. If you don/'/t dance, they/'/ll steal your feet. Hit the nail on the head. |
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Re: I Should Ever Feel So
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by RussellReinhardt on
Tuesday, 19th April 2016 @ 06:51:29 PM AEST
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Hello my brother
Well what do we have here? A beautifully pend poem that tell/'/s of sensual love yet not to revealing, leaving much to the readers own imagination, very well done in provoking my mind. God bless
Greetings
Rus |
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Re: I Should Ever Feel So
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by softerware on
Thursday, 21st April 2016 @ 01:06:04 AM AEST
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I need a cigarette.
Whew..sensual and warm. So well balanced between affection and damn the torpedos.
A very enjoyable journey, thank you!
Think I will re-read when I catch my breath.
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