|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
like keeping a pinpen in a hand grenade
Contributed by
ming
on
Saturday, 16th April 2016 @ 12:18:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
|
submerged fear glitters
dissolution and dreams
and am I threadbare game
unraveling?
no snake can save me
there may be something
or somethings to worry about
but like dandelion seeds fly
unconsequitiality...
my ink-chatter cascades
and fate awaits with words
like poisoned spikes
and every soul can be seduced
whether it/'/s lace or blades
so I bent and retained
the pin held my pen strays.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2016-04-16 12:18:56]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: like keeping a pinpen in a hand grenade
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Saturday, 16th April 2016 @ 05:33:18 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I admire your wording, but how can every poem you write be based on a quote from another person?
|
|
|
Re: like keeping a pinpen in a hand grenade
(User Rating: 1 )
by ming on
Saturday, 16th April 2016 @ 06:16:07 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Pm/'/ed you. |
|
|
Re: like keeping a pinpen in a hand grenade
(User Rating: 1 )
by duff on
Saturday, 16th April 2016 @ 08:22:59 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| I love the creativity and each line leads in so many directions that you can/'/t help wonder what is true and what isn/'/t. Seductive and provoking |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Site Help
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
