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fault line
Contributed by
poeticjestix
on
Wednesday, 20th April 2016 @ 08:43:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
didactic
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Each word a brick;
simple in form.
Cast down with little thought
other than to fit,
and fit it must.
The wall grows,
almost gleefully at first,
but with each line
dilution,
a journey.
A puzzle.
If we build
without ever changing perspective
they merge to a meaningless platform
from which
we can no longer see
all that is truly before us.
Copyright ©
poeticjestix
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2016-04-20 08:43:33]
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Re: fault line
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by JamesStockdale on
Friday, 22nd April 2016 @ 06:31:17 AM AEST
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So true. I think this is a brilliant piece.
Well done my friend.
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Re: fault line
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by Waynster on
Friday, 22nd April 2016 @ 04:41:37 PM AEST
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This is a brilliant write, keep up the good work.
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