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Little Harbour
Contributed by
Urizen
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Thursday, 21st April 2016 @ 04:33:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
Holiday Poetry
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The stones roll upon the shore,
And the light ripples golden through the clear crystal sea,
I am here with thoughts
Of you and me
The distant lights,
And disused sheds,
abandoned long ago,
The salty longings of past times.
Resonate.
Copyright ©
Urizen
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2016-04-21 04:33:30]
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Re: Little Harbour
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by xHeathenx on
Thursday, 21st April 2016 @ 04:07:46 PM AEST
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I like this, but the last line is the most cryptic one to me.
This feels like a nostalgic return home, to picture waves coming in and back out to see, while sunlight glitters on the water as well as on rocks along a low-tide shore; to find some businesses have closed down, some people lost interest in their hobbies, and so they no longer go to their shed to grab their lawn-mower, and return to do some sort of crafting like those in a garage; and the resonate may be for these thoughts to come, or just for them to be powerful. Hard to say, but I like it either way. :) |
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Re: Little Harbour
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by JamesStockdale on
Friday, 22nd April 2016 @ 06:29:33 AM AEST
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Heathen summed it up rather well and is becoming a master at this. I like your poem and I like the quaint down home feeling I get from it and on a personal note I get it. Well done!
James |
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