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Cascaded Blue
Contributed by
jamesstockdale
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Saturday, 23rd April 2016 @ 12:07:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Lying here with you
Running my fingers through
Your honey dipped stranded doo
Gazing at your soft creamy skin
Smooth as buttered cheese fondue
Your soft moist lips so raspberry red
So inviting, only they could raise the dead
In your sleep you are so gentle and kind
For in this state you/'/d be
Forever mine
Your gentle soft breath
The serene flowing flex of your exhaling breast
Send me off to a dream
Away with you
To walk through a field of flowers
Just like your eyes
They too are a beautiful shade of cascaded blue
Together we will walk this joyous land
Hand in hand
Simmering under the sweltering sun
As we begin to melt
Soon we shall become
Together as one
Copyright ©
jamesstockdale
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2016-04-23 12:07:13]
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Re: Cascaded Blue
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 23rd April 2016 @ 05:15:53 PM AEST
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truly sweet and lovely:)
hugs n love nessa |
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Re: Cascaded Blue
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by irisblue on
Saturday, 23rd April 2016 @ 06:18:43 PM AEST
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awwww James!!! Got my heart beating and then melted it!!!! I hope you shared this with your lady!
love this,
Irisblue |
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Re: Cascaded Blue
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by duff on
Saturday, 23rd April 2016 @ 07:32:52 PM AEST
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| The imagery is quite stunning here and it just takes you on a journey throughout the entirety. This was painting with a pen and I enjoyed it. Well done |
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Re: Cascaded Blue
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 24th April 2016 @ 02:19:57 AM AEST
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cascade and blue
a dance, such as the waterfall
in the shimmering sun
the sky appears blue too
with no cloud in sight
A lady a women
A boy a man
cascading along
thinking if no one ever
marries me
And I see no reason why they
should
thinking where and why
and of whom it is
I will be buried with
under the weeping willow
tree
I suppose the only one I truly loved
knows
Your poem is more than sweet
its true as well as magic is
Peace!
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Re: Cascaded Blue
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by unknown_utopia on
Sunday, 24th April 2016 @ 11:00:15 AM AEST
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| thanx for a nice and sweet flow...... |
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Re: Cascaded Blue
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by softerware on
Tuesday, 26th April 2016 @ 11:28:08 PM AEST
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James, how enchanting to know that men think of women so romantically! ( promise I won/'/t tell a soul guys!) This touches the heart!
Just proves that when we love someone, we can always find a way to idolize them, so they are worthy of our affection. You have justified your love for her.
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Re: Cascaded Blue
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 29th April 2016 @ 07:17:19 PM AEST
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Loved the effortless contentment that flowed through your lines.
Who needs alcohol, cigarettes, caffeine or god knows what else to stimulate the mind when Love will do it all for you without any unwanted side effects
Beautiful and inspiring write
Steve |
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Re: Cascaded Blue
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 4th December 2016 @ 12:16:09 PM AEST
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You dominate the horror genre... Hehe.
This is syrupy sweet, but sweet it is. Love is everything. No one around here is going to knock your success at that. Least of all, me.
Thank you for the smile!
~Scorp |
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Re: Cascaded Blue
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 6th September 2020 @ 09:46:59 AM AEST
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//Those first few lines were making me hungry.
Kidding aside, this is a great love poem!!!
So, is now an good time to use my Mr. Burns excellent gif? Ha ha. Figured out a way to make it work. Okay, never mind.
Thank you, Jimmy.
Dugan
😎
P.S. Do you remember what poem I tried to use that gif on? I gotta get it fixed.
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