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DROWNING
Contributed by
hray42
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Friday, 29th April 2016 @ 07:09:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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i/'/m drowning, so suffocated by the likes of you
you stand so awfully close, and with those eyes
you stand for almost anything, it/'/s those "anythings" i despise...
i/'/m losing, i feel so lost when i/'/m with you
you put this blindfold on me, and much too tight
so now i never truly know if this darkness means the night...
i am drowning, anchored down by the weight of you
i cannot wage this war again, or in any other way
i will leave this all behind me, when these hours meet the day...
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hray42
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2016-04-29 07:09:34]
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Re: DROWNING
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by Invierno on
Friday, 29th April 2016 @ 09:46:28 PM AEST
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I felt intensely wrote you wrote. But, the big thing here is /'/felt/'/; when one has reached the level of despair herein exhibited, it is time to consider your own survival as a being of light.
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Re: DROWNING
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 13th June 2016 @ 03:57:30 PM AEST
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| Yeah I/'/ve felt that one... Good stuff (or not) |
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