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love or not
Contributed by
chelbelle
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Friday, 29th April 2016 @ 07:21:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The flesh is spliced, the mind confused, I know you care, our spirits bruised, alast awakened the missing simpler flare, intense emotion can leave hearts abused; yurned devotion loins unused, none such thoughts or fantasy shall cure;
I can/'/t give up on something as brilliant or true, the day has come, I indeed for rue, can/'/t erase thine deed had due, blinded tortures we/'/ve yet to undo;
Forever silenced forced to block the view, nevertheless highness put away, a forcefield hulk strong, insisting the stay, together as one is the only pure way:::::::
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chelbelle
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2016-04-29 07:21:45]
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Re: love or not
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 29th April 2016 @ 06:43:52 PM AEST
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You/'/ve packed quite a dramatic punch into the lines here.
Strong and forceful,words tied together to form a clever whole
Glad to see people still with a passion to write, I think I/'/ve been away too long and missed the spirit of the people here.
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Re: love or not
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by duff on
Sunday, 1st May 2016 @ 08:38:23 PM AEST
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I like the rhythm to this. It has a playful bounce throughout.
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