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Ed and Tad, Our Illicit Love
Contributed by
tflm
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Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 05:05:00 AM in AEST
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You were close to me
Closer than tears on a pillow
But lost we were
Our fate does sown
Pain on a sunny day
And as we prayed
to be better than we were
Low behold, the guilt on earth
Of eternal damnation
And our father's sins
That sweet black hair
Intercrossed with auburn
And lover's heat
Sweet, and taciturn
Brings pain oh woeful day
And as we prayed
to be better than we were
Low behold, the guilt on earth
Of eternal damnation
And our father's sins
When touch does sate
The devils heat
Should not one seek
Beyond mortal feat
A forgiving hand
And as we prayed
to be better than we were
Low behold, the guilt on earth
Of eternal damnation
And our father's sins
But strength and resolve
Tinders shield of steel
Mightiest faithful
Heart does not feel
And Paris's doom
And as we prayed
to be better than we were
Low behold, the guilt on earth
Of eternal damnation
And our father's sins
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tflm
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Re: Ed and Tad, Our Illicit Love
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by tease_whizz on
Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 07:24:24 AM AEST
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| brilliant :) keep them coming, The Quiet Girl x |
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Re: Ed and Tad, Our Illicit Love
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 1st June 2003 @ 11:48:46 AM AEST
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tflm your problems are documented very well in this piece of literature. This arks back to your childhood, and also you rebelling against your priesthood and many other small personality deficiencies that you feel you have.
Remember that all you have to do is admit it, stop the madness and convince yourself that self-denial isn't the way to go.
I have to think though that life does take people on mysterious journeys and some it takes to runcorn. You appear to have reached your runcorn in the form of Holloway road.
The poem is also a great insight into the lost love that you feel towards our young friend Tad, with a mere look towards him you can create some hope of lust.
Let's think for a moment tflm, mcvities and other coporate pseudonyms will not save you from your true identity.
Thank you....
Ed |
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Re: Ed and Tad, Our Illicit Love
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by EndEformEtrancE on
Sunday, 1st June 2003 @ 04:39:46 PM AEST
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beautiful, amazing, you capture emotion so well.
thankyou for sharing this great christian poem! |
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Re: Ed and Tad, Our Illicit Love
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by EndEformEtrancE on
Sunday, 1st June 2003 @ 04:39:58 PM AEST
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beautiful, amazing, you capture emotion so well.
thankyou for sharing this great christian poem! |
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Re: Ed and Tad, Our Illicit Love
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 2nd June 2003 @ 09:24:58 AM AEST
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interesting write.. good insight into the problem of faith over worldly desires
Shari |
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Re: Ed and Tad, Our Illicit Love
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th June 2003 @ 06:58:39 AM AEST
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| i feel your pain, brother. that's not an invite to a gangbang though. |
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Re: Ed and Tad, Our Illicit Love
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by Wrybod on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 12:54:38 PM AEST
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| Reading the other comments makes me realise that my world is so far removed from yours I cannot empathise. |
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