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Street-Crossed Lovers
Contributed by
Spike
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Saturday, 30th April 2016 @ 08:36:57 AM in AEST
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where is she?
its been hours;
the wine is warm
and Ive tossed the flowers.
3.30 she said, 81st and Fifth!
in the distance, near that tree,
some other schmuck like me.
not that it has to matter,
but I hope their luck is faring better
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where is he?
its like a bad dream;
if hes stood me up, Ill scream!
I said 81st and Third at 5.30;
was I being too flirty?
now my bouffants flat
and my heels are killing me;
Im on a weird street,
and I cant find a taxi!
some jerk is pacing in the distance;
I sure hope theyve got more sense
Copyright ©
Spike
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2016-04-30 08:36:57]
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Re: Street-Crossed Lovers
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by ming on
Saturday, 30th April 2016 @ 11:34:35 AM AEST
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Humorous poem! Nice work.
ming |
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Re: Street-Crossed Lovers
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 30th April 2016 @ 04:14:27 PM AEST
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| Hell, I/'/m seeing a gay man in heels, /'/just waiting on a friend/'/( do you know that song by The Stones?) |
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Re: Street-Crossed Lovers
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Saturday, 30th April 2016 @ 06:09:56 PM AEST
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| Sorry, spike, I homed into the second half, and it seems I/'/ve misread. |
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Re: Street-Crossed Lovers
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by JamesStockdale on
Saturday, 30th April 2016 @ 09:54:05 PM AEST
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I do this daily... lol
This was great, true to life as well.
In the end everybody gets po/'/d too.......
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Re: Street-Crossed Lovers
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Monday, 2nd May 2016 @ 02:30:05 PM AEST
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sound like too confuse person who can/'/t waite to meet each other.
nicely done Spike. |
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Re: Street-Crossed Lovers
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 4th May 2016 @ 09:49:43 PM AEST
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Love it my friend.
Michelle |
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Re: Street-Crossed Lovers
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 4th May 2016 @ 09:49:46 PM AEST
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Love it my friend.
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Re: Street-Crossed Lovers
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 4th May 2016 @ 09:49:50 PM AEST
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Love it my friend.
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