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Bee Girl
Contributed by
irisblue
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Saturday, 30th April 2016 @ 04:52:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
BirthdayPoems
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Shades of you , my bumble bee girl
to watch you gently drift thru the seasons from the very start
as a girl to a woman you have opened your heart.
so many facets of you appear in vibrant glow
your auras hue a kaleidoscope of violet , yellow and blue
I love your inner being, I love the real you
building new memories floating as you shine
keep living and growing each moment in time.
Copyright ©
irisblue
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2016-04-30 16:52:43]
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Re: Bee Girl
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 30th April 2016 @ 06:53:48 PM AEST
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This brought a huge smile to my face. Absolutely beautiful, K.
They sure grow up fast, do they not?
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Re: Bee Girl
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by JamesStockdale on
Saturday, 30th April 2016 @ 07:11:14 PM AEST
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Absolutely wonderful.
Enjoyed this. I know a little bee girl myself.
Happy B/'/day to her as well.
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Re: Bee Girl
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by ming on
Saturday, 30th April 2016 @ 09:04:14 PM AEST
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Aww man, made me remember when the last left the house. Very sweet.
ming |
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Re: Bee Girl
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 1st May 2016 @ 12:30:46 AM AEST
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| P.S. Love the title too! |
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Re: Bee Girl
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by duff on
Sunday, 1st May 2016 @ 08:33:34 PM AEST
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You can feel the warmth and it/'/s a breath of fresh air. Well done
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Re: Bee Girl
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by Invierno on
Monday, 2nd May 2016 @ 08:38:10 AM AEST
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Wonderful job here, Iris. You used your pen as a brush and the colors are vibrant! I very much enjoyed this!
Invierno |
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Re: Bee Girl
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by Invierno on
Thursday, 5th May 2016 @ 05:38:43 PM AEST
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Love it Iris...simple, sweet, true and sincere...just like my wife. Sometimes I feel like a complicated clock to her sundial, but we make it work. The REALLY sad thing is that she knows she is the sundial, but to my joy, she loves me so much anyway.....man.;..I wish I had her humility and grace, but then, I/'/m a damn clock.
Anyway not about me. I like your poem a lot. very cool!
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Re: Bee Girl
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th May 2016 @ 09:55:05 AM AEST
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| I/'/m assuming this is for your daughter, and quite beautiful and touching it is too. |
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Re: Bee Girl
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 24th June 2016 @ 06:27:29 PM AEST
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I/'/m sure this will paint a strong smile on the face of everyone who reads it.
Captivating and full of warmth.
Great write.
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Re: Bee Girl
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by Tiny_Tina on
Tuesday, 16th August 2016 @ 02:21:16 AM AEST
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How very sweet.
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Re: Bee Girl
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 29th November 2016 @ 07:47:32 PM AEST
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Aww, this is so sweet. What a lovely write.
Thank you for the smile.
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