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Day At The Beach
Contributed by
duff
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Saturday, 7th May 2016 @ 03:43:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Outside the harbor Lincoln black rolling Radio got the stones Lucky strike burning Sandy hair blowing Leather jacket cold In grey roar morning Brake lights parking Trunk key turning Blue jeans strolling Sunlight sneaking Betrayal into smoke Associate no more A snub nose spoke
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2016-05-07 15:43:39] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Day At The Beach
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 7th May 2016 @ 04:39:11 PM AEST (User
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I once tried to pull a girl on a beach, to Honky Tonk Women, and I got a snubbed nose too. You can/'/t win /'/em all. |
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Re: Day At The Beach
(User Rating: 1 ) by ming on
Sunday, 21st August 2016 @ 10:17:01 PM AEST (User
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The staccato rhythm of this write is magnificent!
ming |
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