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Two Long Years
Contributed by
jamesstockdale
on
Monday, 9th May 2016 @ 10:07:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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It/'/s been two long years
Since you said we/'/re through
Two long years
Since I/'/ve been with you
You/'/re vanilla plain but oh so vain
You think you/'/re leading me on
I got news for you
I/'/m just hanging on
Gazing into your eyes of blue
Somewhere within, I hoped
There would be the girl
I thought I once knew
Sad to say
She/'/s gone away
No one I know
Resides behind those baby blues
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Re: Two Long Years
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by Invierno on
Tuesday, 10th May 2016 @ 07:07:24 AM AEST
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I feel the sadness here, James.
I/'/m sorry for your pain....wish I knew a way.......
Invierno |
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Re: Two Long Years
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by unknown_utopia on
Wednesday, 11th May 2016 @ 01:39:30 AM AEST
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"somewhere within I hoped....
you know I feel you on this flow,
crippled pilgrims are we. |
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Re: Two Long Years
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th May 2016 @ 05:17:44 AM AEST
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| You/'/ll strike a well-delivered poetic note with most. Moving on physically is so much easier than the other. |
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Re: Two Long Years
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by irisblue on
Sunday, 15th May 2016 @ 03:15:47 PM AEST
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James,
it seems somewhat cruel that emotional pain can produce beautiful and heartfelt poetry, but it has and I felt your pain reading this. Giant huggs to you. |
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Re: Two Long Years
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 6th September 2020 @ 09:26:47 AM AEST
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//Geeze, does my former second wife have more exes than I realized? I mean in certain light her emerald greens would look like baby blues.
Those last two lines cut me like a knife. Even ___`s voice changed for a while. I sometimes wondered when I was forced to call her at work if it was one of her coworkers.
Now, are // you// over //her//? Just kidding.
Love it, Jimmy.
Dugany
😎
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