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Contributed by
iodinelove
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Thursday, 12th May 2016 @ 12:13:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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What is the truth
In your eyes?
You see a different sky
Plains of velvet
Glitter in fire
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Mine see a sky
Hidden in past
A dream that cannot be
A fire spiraling high
Twinkling ash
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iodinelove
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2016-05-12 12:13:46]
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Re: Free
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by JamesStockdale on
Friday, 13th May 2016 @ 09:34:57 AM AEST
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Very nice poem. Me likes :)
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Re: Free
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by irisblue on
Friday, 13th May 2016 @ 09:41:40 PM AEST
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| aaahh. Bea uti ful!!!!!!!!! Love this. |
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Re: Free
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by softerware on
Tuesday, 17th May 2016 @ 09:59:30 PM AEST
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Considering that we all see the same sky differently, you have had to step out of yourself to see both sides to write this so well. No easy practice, but so well executed. Hats off to you for crafting this bittersweet reminder!
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