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Regrets You Should Never Have
Contributed by
IsThisMe
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Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 09:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I read the way you felt
Whether it was your words
Or mine in another voice
It struck a chord
A minor if you must know
And I raped it
For it meant nothing
A scribble on a planned life
Less meaningful than a shopping list
A minor if you must know
Has not the choice
That you never had
But it's okay now
If you can clear the clouds
A minor if you must know
Breaks God's heart in two
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2003-05-31 09:05:00]
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Re: Regrets You Should Never Have
(User Rating: 1 )
by tease_whizz on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 02:22:15 PM AEST
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| hmm, i like it - repetition is effective and the simplicity of the style and the ambiguity of the content create a nice contrast. a little disturbing maybe, perhaps because i haven't fully understood it. great write, Kate x |
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