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crystallized moment
Contributed by
Jigget
on
Friday, 20th May 2016 @ 01:08:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
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crystallized moment
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beautifully shattered,perfectly broken
a singing scream the wind left unspoken
a chance at confusion is what i see in you,
a distracting subtraction caused by what//'//s eating through you
a randomly planned interlude that subdues you,
but only as much as you let it undo you
the sly, knowing grin underneath your bold stare
says the first thing you feel is a desire to care
but with care comes cost: the price of the Lost....
the give-all-you-got.
the make-them-all-rot
the distance. the hate.
the dancing with fate.
yet in this fracture and twirl of a whirl to the grave,
our moment crystallized is forever saved.
jdh
may4th16
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Re: crystallized moment
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by softerware on
Friday, 20th May 2016 @ 11:34:43 PM AEST
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Sometimes you can look at someone and see the destination. Your push-pull sing-song style begs the question --why do we find calamity so seductive?
Wisely, you have described the symptoms well, and left us to find our own answer!
Who could disagree?
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Re: crystallized moment
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by Invierno on
Saturday, 21st May 2016 @ 04:04:07 PM AEST
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Great to see you back, man. I/'/ve missed your writings. I know of whence you write, and agree with your conclusions.
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